The Storm and the Darkness- Plot Overview


Several people have asked me for some plot information about The Storm and The Darkness. I’m in the middle of re-writes now (I know I’ve been saying this since November, but this time I really mean it), but for the most part, I’m in the home stretch and I think we’re looking at a final draft by March.

House of Crimson & Clover

If you’ve read St. Charles at Dusk, you’ll know that the story centers around two families- The Sullivans and the Deschanels- specifically, one member of each: Oz of the Sullivans, and Adrienne of the Deschanels. When I originally wrote this book, it was meant as a standalone story. The end of the book is pretty “tied up,” so to speak, as I never intended it to have a sequel. Yet, as I continued to write other things, I still found myself drawn to the story; not so much Oz and Adrienne’s story, but the greater stories of the Sullivans and Deschanels. Even when I tried writing something else, I kept coming back to these families. The secondary characters were drawing me in, and suddenly other characters were coming to life as well.

In 2010, I wrote The Storm and the Darkness as my NaNoWriMo subject. Then in 2011, I wrote another Sullivan/Deschanel story, and again in 2012. It occurred to me that a pattern was emerging and that rather than being afraid of it, maybe it was time to embrace it. Thus, this has become a series, and I’ve named it House of Crimson & Clover.

In addition to writing additional stories, I’ve also started some complex genealogy charts for both families. Snapshots of these are posted on the House of Crimson and Clover Facebook Page.

Introducing The Story

The Storm and the Darkness, as I mentioned, started as my NaNoWriMo project in 2010. One of the characters I had been most drawn to from St. Charles at Dusk was Nicolas. I loved writing him, but I wasn’t ready to write for him as a central character. I didn’t want to write about Oz and Adrienne as centrals anymore, either. So, the idea came to me about a Deschanel cousin, one that could have a friendship with Nicolas, which would give me more opportunities to find his voice. This angle also allowed me to make mentions of Oz and Adrienne if I wanted (and I did; they do figure into this story as well).

The story is told through alternating POVs. There are three main characters: Ana Deschanel, Jonathan St. Andrews, and Finnegan St Andrews. There are also pieces of the story told by supporting characters, two of which will be familiar to readers and one that is new: Nicolas Deschanel, Oz Sullivan, and Alex Whitman.

Ana Deschanel

The central character in this story is Ana Deschanel. Ana is quiet, reserved, and mostly introspective, which lends to her having very few close relationships in her life. She is an only child, and her mother died when she was an infant. Despite having a huge network of cousins, aunts, and uncles, the only relative she finds herself able to relate to is Nicolas, who is also her only close friend. She sees Nicolas as the only one who actually understands her, and on the other end, Nicolas sees Ana as one of the only people whom he can be himself around as well.

Entering her thirties, Ana begins to think more deeply about what she wants to do with her life. She has seen moderate success as an essay writer, and she is mostly content with it, but she begins to feel as if something is fundamentally wrong with her life. She can’t put her finger on it, but as the feelings grow, they become impossible to ignore. The thoughts begin to become oppressive, and she realizes she needs to leave New Orleans for a while to clear her thoughts.

She decides to spend a winter at one of her father’s properties: a home on a small island community off the coast of Maine, near Portland. The island is small- about a thousand residents- and secluded, and most of all, quiet. She arrives in the late fall and prepares for what is expected to be a harsh winter-something she has never experienced growing up in New Orleans.

The house is on the coast, and faces the Atlantic. It is located at a curve in the bend of the island and although she has neighbors on both sides, only her neighbors to the north are in near proximity to her. These neighbors are the St. Andrews brothers: Jonathan and Finnegan.

Jonathan St. Andrews

Jonathan is the oldest St. Andrews brother, being a couple of years older than Ana. Like Ana, he is also introverted but often comes across to others as rude and reclusive. He is challenging to read, and he says very little about what he is thinking. He is the island’s veterinarian, a profession he chose after a short-lived medical career that he abandoned because of the pressures of dealing with people. Ana’s first interaction with him is unpleasant at best, and for his part, Jonathan is unsettled by her arrival on the island due to his averseness to change.

Finnegan St. Andrews

Finnegan, or Finn, is the younger of the brothers. Unlike Jonathan, he is spirited, outgoing, and sees the world through happier eyes. Although he went to college as well, he has chosen a life on the island, as a man of the sea, and spends his days out on the ocean fishing. He feels a connection to the island that runs deep, and his aspirations in life do not extend beyond its shores. His reaction to Ana’s arrival on the island is one of mild curiosity, and seeing her sitting in her chair reading when he comes back from the ocean becomes a welcome part of his daily routine.

The Storm and the Darkness

When Ana had been on the island about a month, she and Finn have their first conversation one afternoon as he is coming back from a day on the sea. Over dinner at her house, he tells her that he thinks the first of the winter storms are coming in that evening, and by the time he leaves to go home, there are already several inches of snow on the ground and winds are picking up. Later that night she realizes he has left his keys and naively decides to brave the storm to return them. Along the way she stumbles, falls, and loses consciousness after hitting her head on the rocks. By accident, Finn and Jonathan find her and take her back to their house, where she continues to remain unconscious, but stable. As the brothers watch over her, the storm worsens, and communication is cut off from the island to the outside world. Things only get worse when their food storage is discovered to be spoiled and they slowly begin to realize that there are other sinister forces at work, involving someone they’ve known their whole lives who is harboring a dark secret. At the same time, Nicolas begins to worry when he hasn’t heard from Ana, and he enlists the help of Oz to investigate the situation. All of these situations begin to escalate as the storm grows, and finally come together in a dramatic conclusion.

What’s Next For the Series

There are two partially completed, as yet unnamed, stories in the series. Book 3 features Nicolas as the central character. Book 4 explores some of the additional branches of the Deschanel tree, with a story that starts several generations back and continues into the present. Both will need some heavy editing (in other words: they are pretty terrible in their current state), but I feel like both stories have a lot of potential, and there are plenty more in my head just waiting to be written.

10 thoughts on “The Storm and the Darkness- Plot Overview

  1. Okay, I’m hooked. But that’s the easy part. If I were a fish I’d be waiting to jump into the boat the minute it shoved off from the dock.! I’m interested in the sinister aspect and Ana’s involvement – simply by association I’m assuming. I hope that there is a pet involved. It seems reasonable that a vet would have a pet or a sea going man who spends so much time alone may have one. Better yet, Ana needs a really intelligent and understanding pet to help fill the friendship void. I’m thinking that a devoted pet could be a tremendous tool when working out the technical details of a plot. (?) Having said that, I’ll turn the plot back over to you so you can do your magic.

  2. You know- I had a pet originally in the story (Finn had a dog), but removed it in later edits. Then I thought to myself that maybe there should be a stray that comes by Ana’s place that she feeds and takes a liking to, but I never did write it. Perhaps I will. In fact, her first interaction with Jonathan centers around her taking a cat to him that she saw being hit by a car, and maybe that cat can be the stray. I agree that pets can often make better plot companions than humans, and Ana’s internal dialogue might be more interesting if relayed to an unexpected friendship with a cat.

  3. Reblogged this on giosueghisalberti and commented:
    As you can probably tell, I’m new to this. I have so many questions, but I’ll only take up your time with one. I noticed that part of your blog is to promote your books. I’d like to do the same and really have no idea of how to go about it… also because the idea of self-promotion seems… I don’t know, questionable. I do see that it’s just one part of your writing, and you seem to accept it well enough. Here’s the question: what would be the first thing you would do if you had just self-published your first novel? No worries if you can’t answer.

    And a personal question: how do you find the time to be able to write and blog as well? Again, maybe I’m seeing it from the perspective of someone new to all this.

    1. There is a fine line between healthy self-promotion and shameless self promotion. For example, I have a Facebook fan page for my work, but I try to post only seldom about writing (unless its very general, or if I have major updates) on my personal Facebook page, so as not to inundate my friends and family with it. From my research, most successful self-published writers have and maintain a blog with content that includes both their writing and other topics, for a balanced approach. My goal is to use my blog as a place to talk about/discuss topics I am passionate about, and to have a central place where readers can come learn about my novels as well. I see this blog as my “homepage.”

      If I had to do it all over again, I would have started with the blogging and social media presence BEFORE I published. I did create the FB page before publishing, to create hype, but that’s different than creating a readership and sphere of influence. As for the first thing I would do after? Start working on the next one. I’ve also seen that most successful self-published writers don’t see that success until they have multiple books out, as it gives readers an opportunity to keep reading if they enjoy your first story. If they read it, but then have nothing else to go to next, then they will likely forget about you. It also gives you some creative marketing ideas to get readers into your books (i.e. offering the first one free seems to work for a lot of writers, as it is no “risk” for the reader and then if they like your writing they are more likely to pay for the rest).

      In terms of finding the time to write and blog…often times I have to choose one or the other. What’s important to me is finding time to write daily, regardless of what I am writing, and blogging is a form of writing. If I have writer’s block, I’ll blog. When writing comes more naturally, I work on my book. I try to spend at least a few minutes a day working on my book in some way, though; whether it be writing or working on building out the outlines or supporting information. The other thing that helped me with blogging efficiently was knowing ahead of time what things I wanted to post regularly, so when it came time to write the blog article, it comes much quicker to me.

      And I’m happy to answer any questions you have. I am still learning myself, and there seems to be endless things to know and do to market yourself.

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